Thursday, December 17, 2009

plum joker

fading rainbow
as sun sets
heard the rain
as cloud came

midst of darkness
where lights came
disappearing hand
where trigger is pulled

move on
life's brief candle
it and it
fall apart

I've failed you
I've failed myself
I've been treated
which I was supposed to be

it's a new start
a new life
a new joke
yet
an old me



If I pull the trigger this time
I thought it's the right time to do so.

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

I like this poem! Although it is depressive and clearly made in a state of sadness and despair. Please don't walk around feeling depressed. What is on your mind, the universe will return to you. Therefore, think positive thoughts! Things will turn out right, emo kid ;)

bangkia said...

hahaha.. thx for the comment. I just simply write what's on my mind. that's all. XD